托福作文范文：过去百年的重大发现及托福写作技巧

托福写作一般考多少分

1、低：1-16分

处在这个分数段，大体可以说明你的基本的语法和表达有比较大的问题，比如分不清动词名词、搞不清主谓一致、弄不明白该用过去时还是现在完成时等。这部分同学需要进行基本句法和表达的学习，掌握英文最基本的表述方法和表达习惯，达到能表述出基本想法的效果，为后续写出符合题目要求的文字打好基础。

2、中：17-23分

托福写作成绩在20分左右，基本上可以说明你能大体表达出自己对问题的看法，但可能缺乏对托福写作考试题型的了解或者不明白议论文的写作要求，导致答题的逻辑和思路出现问题，跑题偏题比较严重。

3、高：24-30分

托福写作成绩在24以及以上，表明你的表达和逻辑都很不错了。但是在24+的基础上提分可能会相对而言慢一些，想要突破瓶颈可以进一步梳理答题思路刷一些机经题目，注意分论点之间的关系，优化开头结尾的写法以及尽量使论点更有深度。

What discovery in the last century has been most beneficial for your compatriot?

What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

写作思路展开结构分析

这是一道比较自由的题目，可以随意发挥。比如：发现很多油田(经济意义、政治意义、社会意义);发现必须改革开放(reform and open; reform and open to the outside world; reform and open up; reform and openness◇改革开放政策 the policy of reformation and opening);发现计划经济(planned economy)体制 (planning system)问题等等。

本话题高分范文赏析

In the last hundred years man has set a new mind-blowing rate for the development of new technologies. New products are being conceived every minute of every day, all of which will impact man in some respect. However I believe that the most beneficial invention, over the last hundred years is the Internet. Internet allows us to access any information our hearts desire. With the power of the World Wide Web, one can receive information from any country in the world allowing individuals the ability to locate and acquire anything imaginable. Locally, computers via the Internet allow us to search out a variety of services that are necessary for day to day living. This can make living in one of China's many big cities a much more comfortable experience. From net games to online chatting to viewing movies or Websites, Internet has the ability to entertain us in a wide variety of ways. For example, many people join forums where they can chat with their peers about any variety of topics. Many movie trailers are first released on the Internet where enthusiastic fans can be the first to catch a glimpse of the latest and greatest blockbusters. Computers also bring us the world of instant messaging, allowing people with a computer and an Internet connection to chat for free with their friends and colleagues anywhere in the world. Internet has changed the very way businesses operate, bringing efficiency and convenience to the work place. The most obvious development is the use of emails instead of surface mail. Emails allow businesses to communicate large amounts of information almost instantly, saving time, paper and postage fees. Instead of making long distance telephone calls, some businesses have started using Web conferencing. Web conferencing not only eliminates long distance fees, but also allows two parties to see each other in real time and simultaneously work on projects through program sharing.

托福写作技巧

段落主题句要能言之有物

这是再功利不过的一条标准，就上面这道题目而言，有的考生注意到了食物准备时间缩短与生活质量改善之间的思路跳跃，因此在两者中间补充说明，食物准备时间缩短能让人性情改变，从而影响人们的生活质量，构思时觉得该立意比较新颖，又能切合主题，继续写下去不无可能。但真正落笔时却不知道该如何说明人们性情转变这一抽象情况，并且自己平常生活中对此也并无较深入的感受和经验，结果说了一句话拓展就不得不匆匆收尾，导致读者要不就读得“意犹未尽”，要不就干脆觉得“云里雾里”。与其这样，还不如选个常见思路，如：快速的生活节奏造成压力，来展开拓展，这样即能展示语言功底，也能显示思维缜密的写作方向。