托福写作的高分句子总结

托福写作是对考生能力考察比较全面的一个项目，句子和语法都是重要考察点，想要考好托福口语，需要考生在平时做好积累。小编为大家带来托福写作高分句型整理。

I 准确的句子表达

1. 句型分析

英语的句型包括以下几种，简单句、复合句、并列句、并列复合句等。在新托福写作中，一般使用复合句，辅以并列句和并列复合句，当然肯定要有简单句，做到长短句相结合。下面摘抄几个句子给大家认识并分析一下复合句和并列复合句。

a. Even though I usually know what I have to say， I cannot always express myself correctly in English.

这句话是一个复合句，由even though引导的让步状语从句。

b. This challenges me to practice my spoken English， with the result that I can complete the speaking tasks more fluently and quickly.

这句话中是一个复合句。with介词结构中，有一个that引导的同位语从句对result进行解释说明。

c. I think this is less than ideal because any differences in opinion become personal conflicts， and therefore that might jeopardize the employee’s job.

上句话是一个并列复杂句。and 连接了两个句子，是一个并列句;because引导的原因状语从句。

d. Shallow writing is indicative of weak critical-thinking skills， and such writing， which is often described as “sophomoric”， receives low mark.

这句话同样是并列复杂句。由and连接两个句子，成为并列句，再一个which引导的定语从句。

2. 有问题的句子的列举

考生写的句子容易出现三个问题：一是使用破碎句，二是使用接连句，三是句子连接不正确。

1). 破碎句

所谓破碎句，就是句子不完整，通常是没有谓语(或者说谓语是动词的非谓语形式，如分词)，或者是从句单独成句。

破碎句：She singing alone. (无谓语，singing是现在分词)

正确句：She is singing alone.

破碎句：He did not come. Because he was sick. (从句单独成句)

正确句：He did not come because he was sick.

2).接连句

所谓接连据，就是两个句子直接连在一起，既未使用连词，也未使用正确的标点符号。

接连句：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句一：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers. However， they have greater freedom in planning their time.

正确句二：Professionals such as lawyers or accountants usually work longer hours than factory workers; however， they have greater freedom in planning their time.

3).句子连接不正确

所谓句子连接不正确，就是两个独立的句子之间以逗号连接，这是不合英语语法的。正确的做法是以连词、分号、冒号、句号等连接两个句子。

不正确句：Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change， there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

正确句：Breaking chalk into two pieces is a physical change， so there is no change in the composition of the chalk.

II 高分表达

除了在句式上长短句相结合准确表达外，建议新托福考生要使用一些特殊的句式，以使句型多样化。句型多样化也是作文得到高分的条件之一。除了我们之前经常提到的高分句式，如倒装句、强调句、状语前置、插入语等，笔者还提出另外一个句式的多样变化，即主语多样化。下面笔者将列举几个句子概括介绍前面四种句型，而重点分析主语多样化。

正常句：Luck only works in extreme cases.

倒装句：Only in extreme cases does luck work.(否定词位于句首的倒装。)

正常句：The internet provides people access to the latest information.

强调句：It is the internet that provides people access to the latest information. (强调the internet)

正常句：The environment has been deteriorating severely along with the development of industry.

状语前置句：Along with the accelerating development of industry， the environment has been deteriorating severely.

正常句：However， new zoos try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space.

插入语：New zoos， however， try to duplicate animals’ natural habitats as much as possible and give animals a comfortable amount of space. (连词however做插入语)

1. 高分句分享
2. Judging from the reams of evidence presented, we can safely conclude that the Three Gorges Project will change the lives of an untold number of people forever.

根据现有的大量证据，我们可以有把握地得出这样的结论：三峡工程将永远改变无数人的生活。

2. The ample evidence presented enables us to reasonably conclude that the scourge of AIDS will be brought under control in the foreseeable future .

提出的充分证据使我们能够合理地得出这样的结论：艾滋病的祸害在可预见的将来就能得到控制。

3. We must seek immediate solutions for problems leading to the rapid depletion of the earth's ozone layer. If allowed to proceed unchecked , the problem will undoubtedly exacerbate global warming and threaten life as we know it today .

我们必须寻求立即解决引起地球臭氧层快速损耗的问题的办法。如果任其自由发展，这一问题无疑会加剧全球升温，并且正如今天我们所知道的那样危及生命。