很多同学写完作文后,感觉自己发挥很好,分数出来后却仍然是6.5,甚至是6分。下面是小编搜集整理的两篇满分的雅思作文以及雅思7分以上的作文怎么写的资料。
雅思满分作文范文篇一:蜜蜂的一生
话题:The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee. Two things to consider are:
范文
The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee. We can see that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. It is also noticeable that there are five main stages in the development of the honey bee, from egg to mature adult insect.
The life cycle of the honey bee begins when the female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every 3 days. Between 9 and 10 days later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.
During the third stage of the life cycle, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. This moulting first takes place 5 days after the egg hatches, then 7 days later, and again another 9 days later. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting stage, and in the space of only 4 days it reaches full maturity.
雅思满分作文范文篇二:房屋保护
话题:The diagrams below show how houses can be protected in areas which are prone to flooding.
范文
The diagrams compare two different methods of defence for homes which are at risk of being flooded.
The key difference between the diagrams is that they show flood protection with and without a stopbank. In either case, the at-risk home is raised on stilts above ground level.
The first diagram shows how a stopbank acts as a flood barrier to stop river water from flooding homes. The stopbank is a small mound of land next to the river that is higher than the 100-year flood level, and prevents the river from bursting its banks. Nearby houses can be built on stilts to prevent flooding from rainwater, and a floodgate beneath the stopbank can be opened to allow this ‘ponding’ to drain off into the river.
When there is no stopbank, as shown in the second diagram, there will be nothing to stop the river from flooding. In this case, the solution is to put buildings on stilts. The height of the stilts is measured so that the floor of the house is 300mm above the 100-year flood level. This measurement is called the ‘freeboard’.
雅思备考写作总体方法:
task 1分析思路,使用固定词汇与句式;task 2 针对题型,写模板(总共就用了2天时间);余下三天,打印出来几套雅思写作专用纸,每天有2篇task 1(弱项),一篇task 2(一定要真正的使用自己的模板)。
雅思写作task 1操作方法: 雅思真题4到8中的line chart, bar chart, pie chart和table题以及地图题、流程图题分别去找出一个,参考以后的范文(只看7.5分以上及官方范文,这几种类型都有的,不是范文就是8分的好文),然后分析其写作结构;
总结出每一个题的写作结构(要如何去进行比较等);
根据10天突破总结各种词(替换词、各种上升、下降词等、连接词),每个最多最多选2个就够了!并且一定要附上例句!
接着就是练吧……拿到一个表,迅速整理出写作结构,就写的快多了!
task 2 操作方法:
1.把蓝皮那个《十天突破IELTS写作完整真题库与6-9分范文全解》翻一遍,分出了几大类。
2.针对这几大类,在书里分别去找一道有范文的题,按照范文总结自己的雅思写作大作文模板,而后又按照这个模板把范文改编了,这样就有了完全使用自己模板的高分范文;再找其他有范文的题目,用这个模板改编至少2篇范文;
3.连着3天每天一篇大作文,完全使用自己的模板。
切记:虽然有这么多种分类,但是每个模板要保持高度的一致性(比如开头,结尾,连接词,举例用语,逻辑结构等等),否则每个都有独特的东西,到时候肯定会混乱的!不实用!模板一定熟记在心!
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